Cover Letter:
With this paper, I was trying to communicate that I do not necessarily associate with or identify with a specific writing style or process because it depends on the individual assignment. My main claim was that you do not necessarily need to have a game plan/distinct writing style in order to be a good/successful writer. I supported this claim with examples of how I wrote in high school and now in college. I did not address any counter examples, however, maybe that is something that I should look into for my final draft of this paper. I thought the over well idea of the paper is working well, and the introduction. However I worry that the overall flow of the paper isn't working well and that the ideas are not connected well enough. In my readers response I want to know if the paper flows well and the claims and ideas make sense together as they are. I also would like to know if I should add anything in or take anything out. If given more time, I would have liked to map out my ideas a little better and had a better game plan of how I was going to connect them. I hope you like my paper, please please let me know if there is anything that doesn't fit/work/make sense. I want to do well on this paper and it's hard for me to read my own work and know how it's going. I think the over all grammar/spelling/technicalities are okay. Please look at formatting and sentence structure along with the flow of the ideas. Thanks!
-Katie
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0BydrCvQbOIepZDQzMjk4ODktNDM4NC00MWUwLWE5NDMtZTVlNGE5Njc2NWU5&hl=en_US
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdkTq_Ky5A5eyOFEqqxJmYuItMeXI4DD1WJdYDvMz9s/edit?hl=en_US
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I think your link was listed as private on Google Docs, so I sent a request to be able to look at it, it will probably just send you an email that you'll have to approve and it will work fine, thanks!
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